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1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled What Makes an Ideal Class? You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words according to the following guidelines: There are still significant differences between a Chinese class and a western one. Which kind of classed do you like most? And what’s your ideal class?

参考答案：What Makes an Ideal Class?
Due to cultural diversity, there are distinct differences between a Chinese class and a western one. A western class is usually given in a relaxed and lively atmosphere, where the class is centered on students and at the same time, teachers mainly act as a guide. In contrast, Chinese teachers traditionally focus more on imparting knowledge and skills to their students in class and a typical Chinese class generally involves less interaction, especially one-on-one interaction, between teachers and students. It’s hard to say which one is superior to the other due to different social background.
In my opinion, an ideal class should take three factors into consideration: teacher, student and atmosphere. First of all, a teacher’s main task is to guide students to learn but not to cram his students. Secondly, classes should be student-oriented. Students’ interests and requirements are the focus of the class. Furthermore, the atmosphere should be lively, relaxed, friendly and orderly. Everyone should participate in the discussion actively and give full play to his subjective initiative in the class.
To sum up, an ideal class is one that can coordinate the relationship among these three factors.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.通过对比，指出中西方课堂的巨大不同。
2.自然过渡，引出个人观点，即中心论点。
3.分三个层次论证了自己的观点，论据充分，观点明确。
4.总结全文，重申主题论点，加强读者对论点的认识。
句法点评：
1. A western class is usually given in a relaxed and lively atmosphere, where the class is centered on students and at the same time, teachers act as a guide.
关系副词where引导非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词atmosphere。
2. To sum up, an ideal class is one that can coordinate the relationship among these three factors.
本句包含that引导的定语从句，先行词是one时，关系代词要用that，不用 which。

2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay stating the advantages and disadvantages of living in college dormitories following the outline given below. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words: The disadvantages of living in a college dormitory; The advantages of living in a college dormitory; My opinion.

参考答案：Many students are obliged to share accommodation with others in college. For them, the lack of privacy is the biggest challenge. And there may even be conflicts in the dormitory due to different habits.
Despite the above disadvantages, there are still many advantages for sharing a dormitory with others. First, because freshmen are far away from their families and old friends, roommates often become the natural company to conquer the loneliness and homesickness in their new life. Second, since college is not all about study, sharing a room with others provides an opportunity for the students to develop communication skills to deal with different people. Besides, roommates can learn from each other.
In conclusion, I think that there are more advantages than disadvantages in living in college dormitories. So we should learn to overcome the problems that may arise, and make friends with our roommates so as to enjoy a colorful campus life.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.介绍住大学生宿舍的弊端。
2.采用让步转折的方式，引出住大学生宿舍的益处。
3.从三个方面具体阐述住大学生宿舍的好处。
4.总结全文并表明自己的观点：住学生宿舍利大于弊；同时提出倡议。
句法点评：
1. Despite the above disadvantages, there are still many advantages for sharing a dormitory with others.
该句既总结上文，又引出下文；同时，关键词紧扣提纲，点明主旨；despite表明让步转折关系。
2. In conclusion, I think that there are more advantages than disadvantages in living in college dormitories.
用in conclusion引出个人观点，总结全文。

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