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1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on food safety. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words according to the following guidelines: The frequent exposure of food safety scandals have caused great concern among the public. Why are there so many food accidents? What do you think is the best solution to solving the problem?

参考答案：With the improvement of our living standards, people are increasingly concerned about their diets. However, there is now a growing unrest over food safety after accidents have occurred across the counter in recent years. I believe at least three factors account for this issue.
First and foremost, manufacturers should be blamed most. Since they aim to make more profits, they may take the risk of breaking laws and sacrificing consumers’ health, producing unhealthy food. For instance, some food producers tend to use overdosed additives in order to make the food look or taste better. In addition, the departments that oversee food safety and enforce policies should also be responsible because the laws and regulations have not been implemented in a strict way in many cases. And sometimes the manufacturers who violated the law haven’t been severely punished. Last but not least, consumers tend to buy or eat the food that tastes better. They may not know that the better the food tastes, the more ingredients it may have, which may pose a greater threat to people’s health.
In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures must be taken before things get worse. Firstly, it is imperative that relevant laws and regulations should be enforced in a stricter way. Secondly, the public’s awareness of the importance of food quality should be raised. Only by taking these actions can the problem be tackled successfully in the nearest future.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇说明随着生活水平的提高人们越来越重视日常饮食。
2.自然过渡：食品安全问题频出，人们日益担忧。
3.首段末句明确指出至少有三个原因促使食品安全问题的发生。
4.分三个层次论证了自己的观点，论据充分，论证有力。
5.末段总结全文，重申观点，并指出我们应采取的办法和措施。
句法点评：
1. Since they aim to make more profits, they may take the risk of breaking laws and sacrificing consumers’ health, producing unhealthy food.
这句话中包含了一个since引导的原因状语从句，此外还包含现在分词producing引导的成分作伴随状语。
2. Firstly, it is imperative that relevant laws and regulations should be enforced in a stricter way.
在这句话中，使用了 “It is imperative that...”的句式，相当于“It is necessary that…”,其中，that引导的主语从句的谓语动词要用虚拟语气，即“should+动词原形（should可以省略）”的形式。

2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on creativity. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words according to the following guidelines: What is creativity about? The ways to develop creativity.

参考答案：Creativity is about learning to do something with a different perspective. Apparently, creativity is a powerful resource we should make full use of. But how to develop creativity? Two key points are concluded as follows:
First of all, as for students, we must keep thinking independently and enjoying asking questions. And also, we should be fully aware of the importance of extensive reading. The more books we read, the broader our horizon is, and the more new ideas we can work out. In addition, teachers play a significant role in cultivating students’ creativity. For example, it is teachers’ responsibility to encourage students to answer more open-ended questions and come up with unique solutions. Teachers are supposed to provide more possibilities for the students, rather than telling them there is only one answer to each question.
All in all, we must recognize the importance of creativity as a crucial ability in the 21st century and spare no efforts to enhance creativity among children, youths and adults. Only in this way can we expect a promising future.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇简要描述创造力的内涵。
2.自然过渡，引出创造力的重要性，紧扣作文话题。
3.首段最后两句明确说明培养创造力的关键要素有两点。
4.分点论述，条理清晰；举例论证，增强说服力。
5.末段总结全文，重申培养创造力的重要性。
句法点评：
1. For example, it is teachers’ responsibility to encourage students to answer more open-ended questions and come up with unique solutions.
这句话使用it作形式主语，真正的主语是不定式to encourage students to answer more open-ended questions and come up with unique solutions，由于主语太长，为避免头重脚轻，用it作形式主语。
2. Teachers are supposed to provide more possibilities for the students, rather than telling them there is only one answer to each question.
be supposed to do sth.，表示“应该做某事”，用来表示劝告、建议、义务、责任等，相当于情态动词should。此外还包含rather than这个词组，意为“而不是，而非”。

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