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1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on sportsmanship according to the following situation. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. Suppose you have watched the FIFA World Cup finals and you get excited about the game, what’s the most appealing to you about the game and what kind of sportsmanship you have felt?

参考答案：Among all the matches of 2014 FIFA World Cup, the most appealing to me was the one between Argentina and Iran in which Messi scored the goal in stoppage time and put Argentina through to the last 16. I will never forget the day on which a kind of sportsmanship called “Never give up” astounded me.
“Never give up” is easier said than done. In any sports events, nearly every sportsman is ever tested to the utmost. However, there is only one gold medal, and people would never know who the winner will be until the last minute. Hence, if they gave up halfway, their chances of tasting victory would be zero forever. That’s why we often hear in sports news that many competitors continue their trainings and contests with their injuries and illnesses. It is the sportsmanship that stimulates them to persist in the end.
As for me—an ordinary person, I have an unshakeable faith in the spirit of perseverance while doing everything that is worth doing. Never give up your dream no matter what difficulties you might encounter on the path to it.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇简要描述情景内容，并根据作文要求指出最吸引人的是比赛中梅西在补时阶段的进球。
2.自然过渡，引出自己的观点，紧扣作文话题。
3.通过因果分析和举例说明的方法进行立论，陈述自己的观点，并巧妙使用承上启下的连接词。
4.末段总结全文，重申观点“永不放弃”，并指出非体育界的追梦人也应怀有坚持不懈的信念。
句法点评：
1. However, there is only one gold medal, and people would never know who the winner will be until the last minute.
这个句子使用了“not..until...”结构，引导时间状语从句。
2. Never give up your dream no matter what difficulties you might encounter on the path to it.
这个句子使用了“no matter+疑问句what/which/who/where/when/whose”这个结构，引导让步状语从句。

2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on influences of media and family on children according to the following instruction. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. Some think a family has a great influence on children’s development, but others believe that the media is a bigger influence. Discuss the two views and give your opinions.

参考答案：Children’s growth is always accompanied by their family, but nowadays the media plays a more and more important role in their daily life. Therefore, the topic on which of them influences children more greatly sparks a heated debate.
Some think a family has a subtle influence on children’s personality, the outlook on life and the way of doing things because of the kinship and domestic intercourse. But others believe that the media is a bigger influence on the three aspects above because the mass media are more frequently exposed to children in their daily life, such as newspaper, broadcast, TV shows, and Internet, which provide almost all kinds of information.
As far as I am concerned, I would like to take the side of the former for two more reasons. One is that parents help children with refining what is real and valuable from the tremendous amount of information from the mass media. The second is that compared with the mass media, face-to-face communication proved to be the most direct and efficient way of promoting emotions of children. Thus, family can influence the children in the way that media cannot.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇引出家庭和媒体对孩子的成长有影响的话题。
2.自然过渡到作文话题。
3.就情景中的两种对立观点进行阐述。
4.末段道出个人观点，层次鲜明，理由充分。
句法点评：
1. One is that parents help children with refining what is real and valuable from the tremendous amount of information from the mass media.
这句话中包含了一个由that引导的表语从句和一个由what引导的宾语从句。
2. The second is that compared with the mass media, face-to-face communication proved to be the most direct and efficient way of promoting emotions of children.
这句话中使用了非谓语动词作状语的结构。“compare”与句子主语 “face-to-face communication”是被动关系，所以用过去分词形式。

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