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1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay according to the following situation. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words: Suppose you are going to graduate from your college in a few days, and your class is holding a party to celebrate the graduation. You are supposed to address your celebration speech to show your gratitude toward your teachers and classmates and share your plans for the future with them.

参考答案：Good afternoon, my dear teachers and classmates. Today, I feel honored to have such a precious opportunity to deliver a graduation speech here on behalf of the graduates. Looking back the past four years, I clearly understand that it is the teachers, classmates and friends who make me what I am now. Without your unselfish support, I would not be here today.
Therefore, I must express my sincere gratitude to all of you. Thank you, my respected and beloved teachers and faculty members. You have provided us with an excellent education which has helped us achieve academic success. I also want to say thanks to my dearest classmates here for sharing happiness and sorrow with me. Thank you all for making my college life so wonderful and meaningful.
It’s time to say goodbye although I am reluctant to do so. But we have to keep moving forward to meet new challenges in our lifetime. Some of us will continue our studies at the postgraduate level. Others will rush to apply their skills to a professional career. As for me, I plan to study abroad to expand my knowledge. No matter where you go and what you do, I wish you good luck.
Congratulations and thank you all.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.致辞以表达荣幸之情开场。
2.自然过渡，引出对老师、同学的感激之情，紧扣作文话题。
3.先老师后同学，分层次表达自己的感谢。
4.段落之间连贯自如，从对师生的感激自然过渡到对未来的展望。
5.末段感情升华，达到烘托气氛的效果。
句法点评：
1. Looking back the past four years, I clearly understand that it is the teachers, classmates and friends who make me what I am now.
这句话中使用了现在分词作状语的结构，其中looking back动作的主语跟主句的主语一致。
2. Without your unselfish support, I would not be here today.
这句话中使用了无if的虚拟语气结构，“Without your unselfish support”是与事实相反的条件。

2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about what you are proudest of in your life. You should state the reasons and write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

参考答案：What are we proudest of in life? The answer varies from person to person. Personally, taking a part-time job while studying in the college is what I am proudest of.
In my opinion, to enter a college is a sign of the beginning of adulthood. To prepare for a successful future, it is time for me to say goodbye to those days when I depended on my parents. I should learn to be independent both economically and psychologically. Therefore, I found a position in a restaurant as a waiter. Hard as it is, I realized that making money is not easy, and thus swore off the bad habit of randomly spending. Besides, I tasted the sweetness of perseverance when I got my first salary. I believe that it is a good start for my future.
There are lots of spoiled children who depend on their parents fully now. Taking a part-time job is a good opportunity for them to learn how to be independent.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.以自问自答的方式开篇，引入主题，吸引读者的注意力。
2.点明主题，表明自己最自豪的事情是做兼职工作。
3.讲述自己要做兼职工作的理由。
4.引入自己做兼职工作的实例，并阐明兼职工作给自己带来的第一个好处。
5.阐明兼职工作给自己带来的另一种收获。
6.从更高的思想境界角度说明大学生从事兼职工作的好处，从而升华文章的主题。
句法点评：
1. To prepare for a successful future, it is time for me to say goodbye to those days when I depended on my parents.
It is time for sb. to do sth.为固定句式，意为“到了某人做某事的时间了”。
2. Taking a part-time job is a good opportunity for them to learn how to be independent.
本句中，taking a part-time job是动名词短语，在句中做主语，疑问词 how与不定式短语连用，共同做动词learn的宾语。

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