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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay commenting on the remark, “Hope for the best,but prepare for the worst.” You can give examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
  • 参考答案:The proverb—“Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst”—means that life is full of beauty and hardship. That’s true for everyone’s life.
    For one thing, as one of the most inspiring spiritual forces in the world, hope is like a beam of bright light shining through one’s life. Consequently, hope for the best before setting our goals. With hope, we’ll overcome any difficulty with an optimistic attitude, meet any challenge with full energy, and compete with any rival with enthusiasm. Hope equips us with confidence, which is the key to success. With hope, we will be highly motivated to achieve higher goals.
    For the other, nobody can always have a plain sailing the whole life. There do exist many undesirable situations where we have to face setbacks and even suffer failures. “Prepare for the worst” can remind us to be practical and clear-minded instead of being blindly confident. How to prepare for the worst? We should make sufficient preparations for the possible worst scenario. Preparing for the worst helps us relieve the pressure and obtain more hopes to succeed, which enables us to laugh at the setbacks and rise above adversity and failure.
  • 系统解析:
    范文点评:
    1.开篇简要解释谚语的寓意:生活虽然美好,却也充满磨难。
    2.第二段先从一方面论述希望的重要性。
    3.第三段从另一方面论述要为生活中发生失败做好准备。
    句法点评:
    1. For one thing, as one of the most inspiring spiritual forces in the world, hope is like a beam of bright light shining through one’s life.
    本句采用比喻修辞手法,把希望比作明光,更加形象地突出了希望的作用。
    2. With hope, we’ll overcome any difficulty with an optimistic attitude, meet any challenge with full energy, and compete with any rival with enthusiasm.
    本句采用三个并列的谓语,强调了希望的作用。
    3. There do exist many undesirable situations where we have to face setbacks and even suffer failures.
    本句中do表示强调;句中使用了where引导的限制性定语从句,使句式更加多样化。
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