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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on facing mistakes properly by commenting on the remark, “You can learn great things from your mistakes when you aren’t busy denying them.” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
- 参考答案：“You can learn great things from your mistakes when you aren’t busy denying them.” It’s true that to err is human. If we don’t deny mistakes, we can learn a lot from them. However, many people are afraid of mistakes. How can we face mistakes properly?
The first step is acknowledging the mistake that you have made. Admit that you have done something wrong rather than blame everyone and everything but yourself for a setback. Of course, you don’t need to condemn yourself as a failure. Understanding your mistake is to clear your way to progress because you can learn some lessons from the mistake. Acknowledging your mistake is to reflect on how you made the mistake so as to make it more likely for you to correct yourself and succeed the next time.
Another way to face your mistakes properly is to ask for advice from an expert who is wise, trustworthy, and willing to listen to your explanations of what you’ve tried so far. If you have all ears to the advice, you’ll gain many valuable insights. - 系统解析：范文点评：
1.开篇引入引言并简要评述。
2.话锋一转，指出许多人害怕错误，然后自然过渡，用疑问句的方式引出本文要探讨的问题：如何正确面对错误。
3.分层论证，从两个方面论证正确面对错误的方式。
句法点评：
1. Understanding your mistake is to clear your way to progress because you can learn some lessons from the mistake.
本句是复杂句，包含了because引导的原因状语从句。除此之外，本句还用到了动名词，在句中作主语，使句式变化多样。
2. Another way to face your mistakes properly is to ask for advice from an expert who is wise, trustworthy, and willing to listen to your explanations of what you’ve tried so far.
本句也是复杂句，包含了who引导的定语从句who is wise，trustworthy...so far，该定语从句中使用了what引导的宾语从句，作介词of的宾语，使得句式结构变化多样，行文流畅。
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