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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on being grateful to our parents by commenting on the remark, “Love and appreciate your parents. We are often so busy growing up. We forget they are also growing old.” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
  • 参考答案:“Love and appreciate your parents. We are often so busy growing up. We forget they are also growing old.” This means that our parents bring us up while we tend to neglect their growing old. It reminds us that we should love and be grateful to our parents.
    Parents love their children the most. When we are confronted with difficulties, our parents always stand by us; when we feel down, they always cheer us up; when we make mistakes, they never hesitate to forgive us; when we succeed, they are always the first to celebrate and share our happiness; when we are in danger, our parents even risk their lives to save us. Our parents are always there with us when we need them.
    However, many of us tend to forget expressing our gratitude to our parents. We always give excuses that we are so busy. But remember, we grow up while our parents grow old. In my opinion, the best way to express gratitude to our parents is to show our true love and care to them. When you tell them about your life, they will be very happy and contented.
  • 系统解析:
    范文点评:
    1.开篇简要解释题目引用的话语的含义,引出感恩父母这一话题。
    2.自然过渡,提出论点:应该爱父母,感恩父母。
    3.第二段首句作为主题句,点明该段大意:父母是最爱我们的人。
    4.具体论述父母为孩子所付出的一切,为我们应感恩父母埋下伏笔。
    5.笔锋一转,指出我们许多人容易忘记表达我们对父母的感激,引出本段感恩父母的主题。
    6.提出感恩父母的具体方式,结束全文。
    句法点评:
    1. When we are confronted with difficulties. our parents always stand by us; when we feel down, they always cheer us up; when we make mistakes, they never hesitate to forgive us; when we succeed,they are always the first to celebrate and share our happiness; when we are in danger, our parents even risk their lives to save us.
    采用排比句式论证父母是最爱我们的人,一气呵成,增强了文章的气势,论证有力。
    2. In my opinion, the best way to express gratitude to our parents is to show our true love and care to them.
    本句用到了不定式短语(to express gratitude to our parents)作定语,不定式短语(to show our true love and care to them)作表语的句法。
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