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1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to mite a short essay on the source of happiness by commenting on the remark, “Happiness is not determined by what’s happening around you, but rather what’s happening inside you. Most people depend on others to gain happiness, but the truth is, it always comes from within.” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

参考答案：“Happiness is not determined by what’s happening around you, but rather what’s happening inside you. Most people depend on others to gain happiness, but the truth is, it always comes from within.” The remark means that happiness comes from within your heart instead of from others or circumstances around you. In my opinion, that’s absolutely true.
If you depend on others to attain happiness, you’ll find that you are at a disadvantage and may lose yourself. Genuine happiness doesn’t lie in driving a fancy race car bought by your parents, or living in a well decorated luxury mansion given by your parents, or receiving a large amount of wealth inherited from your parents. Instead, genuine happiness comes from your own pursuit of life. If you work hard and try your utmost to earn money, you can drive a luxury car of your own, live in a big house you buy for yourself and do whatever you want to do. All these successes, whether big or small, will make you happy.
In a word, happiness comes from yourself, your hard work, your persistence in your dream, and your creation of your beautiful life.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇引入引言并加以解释：幸福源于内心。
2.首段末句明确表达自己赞成引言所蕴含的观点。
3.从正反两个方面阐述自己的观点，论据充分，论证有力。
4.末段总结全文，重申观点。
句法点评：
1. Genuine happiness doesn’t lie in driving a fancy race car bought by your parents, or living in a well decorated luxury mansion given by your parents, or receiving a large amount of wealth inherited from your parents.
此句中用了三个并列的动名词短语driving...or living...or receiving作介词in的宾语，构成排比。
2. All these successes, whether big or small, will make you happy.
句中使用了插入语whether big or small，意为“无论大小”，用在句中可以起到补充说明的作用，同时又赋予了句子节奏感。

2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on starting from doing simple things by commenting on the remark, “Only those who have the patience to do simple things perfectly ever acquire the skill to do difficult things easily.” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

参考答案：“Only those who have the patience to do simple things perfectly ever acquire the skill to do difficult things easily”. Obviously, this refers to the relationship between doing small things and undertaking something big. It is true even today. We cannot expect to do difficult things with ease if we are not patient enough to do simple things perfectly.
There is no denying that if one intends to undertake greater responsibility it is advisable for him to begin with small tasks. Nowadays it has become a trend for many youngsters to talk big. Meanwhile, an increasing number of them deem it useless to do small things like cleaning dorms and washing clothes. However, it is small tasks that enable one to build up adequate experience, knowledge and skills that will be helpful in tackling big tasks. As a matter of fact, an increasing number of wise people have come to realize the significance of small success in life, work and study.
As a college student, I am firmly convinced of the necessity to enhance ourselves by doing small tasks. Accordingly, we should encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to be patient with every small thing so that we will embrace a promising future.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇引入题目中的引言，同时结合主题准确传递出这句引言的内涵。
2.自然过渡，引出这句话在当今依然适用。
3.首段末句明确表达自己的观点：如不能认真对待每一件小事，就不可能轻而易举地完成困难的事。
4.举反面事例说明当今社会“说大话”和“小事无用论”已成为一种趋势，树立靶子，为下文的批驳作铺垫。
5.反驳上文所述现象，从正面说明认真完成小事的意义。
6.末段总结全文，重申观点。
句法点评：
1. There is no denying that it’s one intends to undertake greater responsibility it is advisable for him to begin with small tasks.
There is no denying that...是一个固定句式，意为：“毫无疑问，毋庸置疑……”。由that引导的从句中包含了一个由if引导的条件状语从句，这种从句也称为嵌入式从句。
2. However, it is small tasks that enable one to build up adequate experience, knowledge and skills that will be helpful in tackling big tasks.
这句话是一个强调句式，被强调的部分为small tasks，是为突出做小事情的作用。强调句的结构为：It is (was)+被强调部分+that (who)+句子其他部分，被强调部分为物时只能由that引导，指人时，既可以用that，也可以用who。强调句是一种修辞，是人们为了表达自己的意愿和情感而使用的一种句式。
3. As a college student, I am firmly convinced of the necessity to enhance ourselves by doing small tasks.
这句话中有两个重要结构，第一个是be convinced of，意为“确信”，另一个是the necessity to do sth.，意为“有必要做某事”。

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