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Directions: Suppose you are asked to give advice on whether to attend a vocational college or a university, write an essay to state your opinion. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
- 参考答案：Vocational Education or University Education
① Nowadays, whether joining a vocational college or a university becomes a hard choice for many students.② For me, vocational education can be lucrative and fulfilling as well.
③ To begin with, there is an urgent call for skilled workers from the market. Employers often complain about the severe shortage of workers with expertise. In exchange of such talents, enterprisers are willing to offer a handsome sum of salary. Therefore, graduates from vocational colleges have a promising future in the monetary sense.④ In addition, graduates from vocational colleges can be spiritually fulfilling too. The prejudice against vocational training is being modified. Whatever degree a student gets, what counts most is the contribution he makes to the society. With the specialty they have accumulated from vocational colleges as well as academic studies, students can realize their value with the extra edge over those university students who are generally ⑤ barren of practical skills.
⑥ All in all, it is crystal clear that vocational courses are no longer inferior to a university degree.⑦Rather, it is filling a gap which college education is not necessarily covering when it comes to equipping young people with practical skills for the workplace. - 系统解析：①开门见山，描述现象：应该就读职业院校还是大学成为许多学生的两难选择。
②摆明自己观点：赞成选择职业院校。
③使用To begin with引出职业院校的第一个优势：保证了毕业生有“钱途”的未来。
④使用In addition引出职业院校的第二个优势：拥有专业技能可以使人精神上有充分的享受。
⑤恰当运用暗喻的修辞手法，是加分亮点。
⑥总结全文，得出结论：职业院校不比大学差。
⑦指出职业院校弥补了大学的短板，升华主题。
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