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Directions: Suppose you are asked to give advice on whether to attend college at home or abroad, write an essay to state your opinion. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
- 参考答案：To Attend College Abroad
① Nowadays a lot of college graduates are faced with two options for their further education: to study home or to study abroad. Some choose to stay home, while others prefer the latter. ② If I were one of them, I would choose to study abroad.
③ First of all, studying abroad can broaden our horizon. When we study abroad, we can make friends with people from different cultures and learn about other lifestyles. It will help cultivate a global point of view, which is very important in this era. ④ Secondly, studying abroad can foster self-dependence. When we stay overseas, we have to rely on ourselves to solve whatever problem we may encounter. Such self-dependence is beneficial to us in the future.
⑤ There are many concerns about studying abroad, such as safety. However, if we take proper precautions, we can ensure our safety. ⑥ Therefore, after carefully weighing the advantages against the disadvantages of studying abroad, I still consider it a preferential choice. - 系统解析：①开门见山，描述现象：许多学生面临在国内读大学还是去国外留学的选择。
②表明自己的观点：选择去国外留学。
③使用First of all引出海外留学的第一个优势：留学可以开阔视野。
④使用Secondly引出海外留学的第二个优势：留学可以培养自立能力。
⑤指出人们对海外留学有很多顾虑，如安全问题。
⑥总结全文，重申观点。
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