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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying "Help others, and you will be helped when you are in need." You can cite examples to illustrate your views. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
- 参考答案：Be Generous with Your Help
①When it comes to the topic of help, we are frequently told that, "Help others, and you will be helped when you are in need." ②Simple as the saying is, it implies the importance of helping others in need. ③What I learn from the remark, in short words, is that helping others is helping yourself.
④Examples can easily be found to make this point clearer. ⑤The story of the ant and the dove is a case in point. An ant slipped into the river when drinking along the river. A dove heard his cries for help and threw him a leaf, which helped the ant float back to the bank. After a few days, a hunter was raising his gun to the dove as she was building her nest. Seeing this, the ant ran quickly to bite the hunter's leg. The dove heard the hunter's scream and flew away.
⑥All in all, this example indicates that when we offer our help to others, we are leaving a way open for the future. ⑦Helping others is a virtue, and we should take some measures to carry forward this virtue and do others a favor. ⑧Only in this way can we build a loving and harmonious society. - 系统解析：①提出话题，引出引言。
②解释引言的内涵--帮助他人的重要性。
③阐述自己的观点--帮助他人就是帮助自己。
④概述帮助他人就是帮助自己的实例有很多。
⑤以“鸽子和蚂蚁”的故事论证自己的观点。
⑥总结由故事得出的结论--帮助别人等于给自己留后路。
⑦⑧指出帮助他人是一种美德，因此我们应该把这种美德发扬光大，从而使社会更加美好和谐。
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