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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on how to balance job responsibilities and personal interests. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
- 参考答案：How to Balance Job Responsibilities and Personal Interests
① In today's highly competitive environment, the heavy workload makes people out of breath and leaves them no time for their hobbies. ② Therefore, learning to balance job responsibilities and personal interests is of great significance
for modem people.
③ Here are some suggestions which can help us achieve the balance. ④ In the first place, we should be aware that although work duties are our first priority, it doesn't mean that we cannot explore personal interests. ⑤ Secondly, ifs important to realize that beneficial activities after work help us get relaxed. We can transfer our focus from busy job by reading an interesting book or listening to a favorite song, thereby getting our intense nerves calm down.⑥ What's more, find enough time to develop our hobbies by finishing job tasks on time. When working, we should arrange our time reasonably and complete our daily work efficiently, which will give us more freedom to allocate time to pursue personal interests.
⑦In sum, it is absolutely do-able to strike a balance between full-time work and personal hobbies as long as we realize the benefits of cultivating interests and the importance of reasonable time arrangement. - 系统解析：①开门见山，描述现象：繁重的工作使人们 没有时间培养兴趣爱好。
②使用 therefore 引出话题：在工作职责和个人兴趣之间取得平衡对现代人来说非 常重要。
③提出自己的建议。
④⑤⑥分别使用in the first place、 secondly、what's more 具体给出自己的三点建议，层次分明。
⑦使用 in sum 总结全文，再次重申自己的观点。
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