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For this part, you are allowed 30 mimutes to write an essay on the importance of having a sense of family responsibility. You should wrote at least 150 words bul no more than 200 words.
  • 参考答案:Home should be where people feel secure and comfortable. Maintaining harmony at home is essential for the well-being of an individual, a couple and their offspring, and even the society. But many are being plagued by family discord, a problem that boils down to the lack of a sense of family responsibility.
    Everyone has certain roles to take on in his or her family. Parents are expected to ensure their children are well-nourished and well-educated, helping them build a strong body and great character. We college students also need to take our responsibility as adult children. Being independent of our parents as early as possible lightens the financial burden on them. Learning to be mature and sensible can prevent us from becoming a constant source of worry to them. Fulfilling our filial duty to the best of our abilities allows them to enjoy life in midlife years, retirement and the twilight years.
    In brief, a sense of responsibility among family members is a prerequisite for a warm and loving family. Often far away from home, we may start by keeping in contact with our parents, as a means to meet our obligations as part of our family.
  • 系统解析:
    第一段:由常见负面现象“家庭不和”引出家庭责任感的必要性。
    第二段:以亲子角色作为切入点阐述家庭责任感的重要性:①家长有责任感,子女便能健康成长、塑造良好的人格;②成年子女(大学生)有责任感,能减轻父母经济和心理负担,助其安享中年、退休和晚年生活。
    第三段:总结观点并发出呼吁:大学生平时常与父母联系。
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