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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the chart below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the chart and comment on China's achievements in higher education. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

  • 参考答案:China's Achievements in Higher Education
    [1] The above chart shows that the past three decades have seen great progress in China's higher education. According to the data from the Ministry of Education, China's gross enrolment ratio in higher education has increased from 3.4% in 1990 to 51.6% in 2019.
    [2]The reasons accounting for this phenomenon can be listed as follows. [3]For one thing, during the last thirty years, with the strong support of our country, the reform and development of higher education have made significant achievements in all aspects, including the system of recruitment, fees charging and graduates jobplacing, ensuring that all citizens have access to higher education. [4]For another, in order to promote the quality of higher education, educational administrative departments at various levels and local governments have actively explored measures and ways to increase educational expenditure and improve schooling conditions and the quality of faculty.[5] Besides, with the improvement of living standards, there has been a great change in people's ideas about education, and they are becoming increasingly aware of the necessity of receiving higher education.
    [6]Therefore, China's achievements in higher education are the result of many factors, and I believe that the achievements is bound to have a far-reaching impact on the whole society.
  • 系统解析:
    [1]简要地描述图表,并用相关数据予以说明,指出中国的高等教育取得了巨大的进步。
    [2]解释图表变化的原因。
    [3][4][5]分别用for one thing、for another和besides从高等教育的改革、教学质量的提高以及教育观念的改变三个方面具体阐述了中国高等教育取得成就的原因。
    [6]用therefore总结全文,进一步重申了自己的观点。
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