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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the chart below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the chart and comment on China's achievements in poverty alleviation. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
- 参考答案：China's Achievements in Poverty Alleviation
[1] As the chart shows, in 2012, there are nearly one hundred million rural people in poverty, which accounts for approximately 10% of rural population. However, the following several years have witnessed the continual decrease in this figure, and in 2020, all the Chinese rural people have got rid of poverty. [2] It can be seen that China has made tremendous achievements in poverty alleviation.
[3] It is beyond all doubt that the achievements are attributed to China's rapid economic development in these years, as without economic growth, people's poverty situation cannot be alleviated. [4] And more importantly, the poor have enjoyed the great benefit of the economic growth due to the strong support from our government, active promotion of industrialization and urbanization. Many rural people are attracted to urban areas, so that they can benefit more from the economic growth. [5] In addition, our country has attached great importance to infrastructure establishment in poor areas, such as roads, communication, and electricity facilities, which effectively narrow the gap between the rich and the poor.
[6] To conclude, having witnessed the remarkable achievements in poverty alleviation, we have every reason to believe that our people will lead a richer and better life, and our great country will become more thriving and prosperous. - 系统解析：[1]简要地描述图表，并用相关数据表明，贫困人口大幅减少，贫困率下降。
[2]表明自己的观点，指出中国在扶贫方面取得了巨大的进步。
[3][4][5]分别使用“It is beyond all doubt that... ”“And more importantly... ”“In addition... ”指出中国的扶贫成就归功于经济的增长，更重要的是，贫困人口从经济增长中受益了。此外，加强对贫困地区的基础设施的建设，有效地缩小了贫富差距。
[6]最后用“To conclude... ”总结全文，进一步阐明自己的观点。
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