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失败是成功之母。在过去的初三生活中，你是否犯过错误并从中得到了宝贵的经验与教训，从而取得进步？现在请你谈谈你自己在错误中学到的东西。
内容要求如下：
1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.至少从两个方面谈谈你的进步。
3.文章层次清晰，结构完整，语句连贯。
4.词数：80～100词。
- 参考答案：During the past three years, I have made many mistakes. Also, I have got great experience from them.
On the one hand, I have become better at getting on with people. At first, it was difficult for me to get along with my classmates, so I kept myself away from others. Later I found out the reasons and actively made new friends. Now, I have lots of friends. On the other hand, I have become much more confident. In the beginning, I hated going to school and doing all the homework. I acted as a bad student. However, with the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made great progress and now I do well in all the subjects. - 系统解析：这是一篇提纲作文。内容是谈谈你自己在错误中学到的东西。时态主要为一般过去时。人称主要为第一人称。
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文。
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1.与人交往
2.学习进步
重点短语：
make mistakes犯错误
get on with sb与某人相处
on the one hand…，on the other hand…一方面…另一方面…
keep away from 远离
with the help of sb在某人的帮助下
make progress取得进步
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