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每个人的成长都是一种蜕变的过程，从幼稚走向成熟，从逆境走向成功，请你回忆一下你在成长过程中所经历的一次蜕变，把它写出来与我们一起分享，好吗？要求短文内容包含以下信息：
1.变化前后分别是什么样子的？
2.促成你转变的主要原因是什么？
3.你为此变化而付出了怎样的努力？
4.谈谈你变化后的感受。
提示：
1.字数要求在80-100词左右
2.短文中不能出现真实姓名和校名等信息
3.开头已给出不计入总数。
_____ makes me change
I used to be _________________________
- 参考答案：I used to be a shy girl and stay in the classroom instead of playing with classmates after class. I only like playing computer games at home. Because I hated English, my English mark is very low in the exam. Later, a girl came to my class, and she changed my life. She became my best friend. She asked me to play outside with others. She helped me with my English by encouraging me to read English aloud, to talk to her in English. I also practice English after school. Gradually, My English score was higher and higher. Now, I am a confident and outgoing girl. I have changed so much that many people like to make friends with me. From then on, I have confidence to do better in the future.
- 系统解析：这是一篇提纲作文。主题是谈谈自己在成长过程中所经历的最大的一次转变。结合写作内容，时态主要为一般过去时。人称主要为第一人称并辅以第三人称。
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文。
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1.变化前后分别是什么样子的？
2.促成你转变的主要原因是什么？
3.你为此变化而付出了怎样的努力？
4.谈谈你变化后的感受。
重点短语：
used to do sth过去常常
instead of 代替而不是
help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
by doing sth通过某种方式
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