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1 假如你是某杂志社编辑Mr. Knowledgeable, 根据中学生 Bob的来信内容，给他写封回信，帮助解决他所遇到的问题。字数80-100，开头已给出。 Dear Knowledgeable, My problem is that I can't get on with my family. My parents always say“no”to my ideas without any reason. So I often quarrel（吵架） with them. Also, my brother is not very nice to me. He always refuses to let me watch my favorite TV show. Instead, he watches whatever he wants until late at night. I don't think this is fair. At home, I always feel lonely and nervous. Is that normal? What can I do? Bob Dear Bob ____________________________ Knowledgeable.

参考答案：Dear Bob,
It's normal to have these feelings. Why don't you talk about these feelings with your family? First, it's not right to quarrel with your parents. I don't think quarrelling can solve problems. You'd better have a talk with your parents. Tell them to have a discussion with you before saying“no”to your ideas. Second, Why not sit down and communicate with your brother? You should explain that you don't mind him watching TV all the time. However, he should let you watch your favourite TV show. I hope things will be better soon. Good luck!
Yours,
Knowledgeable
系统解析：
这篇作文要求我们以某杂志社编辑的身份给Bob写一封回信。首先我们必须要读懂Bob的来信，知道Bob有什么问题。根据这封信的内容可知，Bob遇到的问题是他和他的家人相处得不好，他经常跟父母吵架，和哥哥的关系也不好。因此我们要根据这一内容，帮助Bob解决他的问题，给他一些建议。这些内容需要我们自己来想象，给出的建议要符合这个情景，能对Bob起到帮助的作用。例如，我们可以建议他坐下来和父母谈一谈，把你的想法跟父母说清楚，争取获得他们的理解和支持；和自己的哥哥也要进行很好的沟通，让他知道你的意见，互相理解。在提建议的时候，我们经常用到一些句型，如why not…，you should…，you'd better…等。注意语句之间的连接，使文章表达流畅。文体是一封信，注意信的格式；因为这篇文章主要是给Bob提出一些建议，所以时态应用一般现在时；人称主要为第二人称you.

2 加入你校将举行“中学生自我保护”为主题的英语征文活动，请根据下面的体会是写一篇短文。 （一）内容提示： 1.不带管制刀具（restricted knives）到校； 2.上下楼梯不要拥挤； 3.注意饮食安全； 4.注意交通安全，遇到紧急情况（emergency）要报警。 （二）要求：1.短文应包括所提示的内容，可适当发挥； 2.短文中不得出现真实的人名、地名及能够透露你个人身份的信息； 3.词数：80词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 How to protect ourselves How to protect ourselves is especially important to us students.______________________

参考答案：How to protect ourselves
How to protect ourselves is especially important to us students.
First, don't take restricted knives to school. They might hurt our classmates or ourselves. Secondly, there are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So don't crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Thirdly, we should eat more healthy food and we'd better keep away from junk food, At last, we must pay attention to the traffic. Remember to call the police for help when we have an emergency.
It's our duty to protect ourselves. Let's start from today.
系统解析：
本文是一篇材料作文。经过审题可知，要求以“中学生自我保护”为主题写一篇英语征文。内容侧重于如何进行自我保护，这是文章的重点。其要点主要包括已给出的4点，1.不带管制刀具（restricted knives）到校；2.上下楼梯不要拥挤；3.注意饮食安全；4.注意交通安全，遇到紧急情况（emergency）要报警。
要求在作文中缺一不可，也可在此基础上适当发挥。可以分条进行阐述。要看清要求，严格按要求去写，包括不得出现真实的人名、地名及能够透露你个人身份的信息以及字数的要求。由于是论述中学生如何进行自我保护的话题，所以时态为一般现在时；人称为第一人称。在语言上要注意简明扼要，准确到位，重点词汇句型有：first, Secondly, Thirdly, At last, had better do sth, keep away from, pay attention to等。

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