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1 请以"One Thing I'm Proud of"为题，用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文，记述一件你自己认为得意的事情.要求如下： 1）记述事情经过； 2）简要说明你感到得意原因或从中得到的启示. 注意：文章的标题已给出（不计词数）

参考答案：I still remember how I became a good tabletennis player.
The first day I went to high school, I sawsome of my classmates playing table tennis.Amazed how skillful they were, Iwas determined to be just as good.Later on, I watched them carefully to learntheir techniques.Then I kept practicing until I became confident enough tochallenge the good players.At the end of the term I became one of the bestplayers in my class.
I am really proud of this experience, because it helps merealize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve our goals throughhard work.It also helps me better understand the proverb"Practice makesperfect."
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系统解析：
本文考查记叙文的写作，记一件令自己骄傲的事，记叙+议论型作文，命题开放性作写作要点（1）记述事情经过；（2）简要说明你感到得意原因或从中得到的启示.又属提纲作文.在写作时，时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主.重要短语：be determined to （下定决心做…），later on（后来），keep doing （一直做某事），be proud of（对…感到自豪），fulfill our potential（实现我们的潜能），achieve our goals（实现目标）.

2 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖.校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介绍你课外学习英语的经验.请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文： 1.参加英语角的益处； 2.坚持写英语日记的作用； 3.英文阅读网站（EnjoyReading）对你的帮助. 注意：1.词数：120-150； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.

参考答案：As a high schoolstudent, I consider English a very importantsubject.In order to learn it well, apart from English class, I took anactive part in English corner and other after-class English activities, which benefit me a lot.
In the English corner, I meet many friends, who sharethe same interest with me.Besides, sometimes, someforeigners are glad to join us.By talkingwith them, my oral English improved a lot.I also find it useful to keep English diaries.I keep on doing it these years and it is helpful to myEnglish.As a saying goes, practice makes perfect.Only bypractice will we make more progress.Finally, some good English study websites contribute a lot to myimprovement.Through these websites, I can read some classic English passages, poems and stories.What's more, I can learn some learning skills and methodologies, which play an important part in my study process.
All in all, every road leads to Roma, but Ibelieve hard work pays off.
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系统解析：
本文是一篇提纲作文.根据所提供的材料，写一篇稿件，介绍课外学习英语的经验.要点包括：参加英语角的益处；坚持写英语日记的作用；英文阅读网站（EnjoyReading）对你的帮助.写作时以一般现在时为主.人称以第一人称和第三人称为主.重要短语：learn words byheart （用心背单词），feel nervous （觉得紧张），give sb good advice on （给某人关于…的建议），chances to do sth （做某事的机会），make much progress （取得很大进展），memorize new words （记忆新单词）.

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