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生活中.你自己或他人曾有过物品不慎丢失而又找回的经历,其间有烦恼、有惊喜、有感慨…请就此写一篇英语短文.
主要内容包括:1)丢失的物品:2)物品失而复得的经过; 3)你的感想.
注意:
Ⅰ.词数不少于120个;
Ⅱ.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称.
  • 参考答案:Oh, my God!Where is my iPhone? I made a call just now on the bus.Suddenly I remembered I’ve put it on the seat next to me.It’s my birthday present from my father.He would be sad if he knew it.
    I go to school as usual this morning, trying to stay calm.The first two classes ended quickly because I was absent-minded.During the break, my math teacher asked me to visit him.I am very uneasy because I didn’t know what I had done wrong.Seeing me standing there, my teacher showed me my iPhone.Overjoyed, I grasped it back quickly.It turned out that the driver of the bus that I often take saw the picture of me in my iPhone and knew that I was a student of ABC school.
    I am very moved that the driver took so much trouble to send it to my school.The event will always remind me to be kind and helpful.
  • 系统解析:
    本文是一篇提纲作文.要求根据所提供信息写一篇短文.要点包括:丢失的物品;物品失而复得的经过;你的感想.可见文章的中心和重点要放在“经过”的描写之中,但是也要描写自己的感受,写出作者自己的烦恼、惊喜、感慨;尤其要包含失而复得的复杂过程,是一篇夹叙夹议的作文.写作时应以过去时为主.人称以第一人称为主.重要短语:made a call (打电话),as usual(如通常一样),be absent-minded(心不在焉),take trouble to do(不辞辛劳地做某事),It turned out that (结果是,证明是),remind sb to do (提醒某人做某事).
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