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学校正在组织科技创新大赛,你想为日常生活中某件物品(如钢笔、书包、鞋子…)设计添加新功能来参赛.请以“My Magic”为题写~篇英语短文,介绍你的创意.
内容:
1.说明设计理由
2.介绍新功能.
注意;:
1.词数不少于120个t
2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称.
  • 参考答案:My magic pen
    Pens are necessities for every student.So we are all familiar with them.
    I designed my pen.On one hand,it is easy to carry.On the other hand,it’s used not only for writing but also for other important aspects.Firstly,I put some batteries in the pen and fix a light bulb,so when it is dark on my way home or to school.I can use it for a flasher.I won’t be afraid of darkness any more.Secondly,I fix a tiny clock in the pen,so I can know the time and I don’t have to wear my watch.At last,I put a sharp knife on the top of the pen.I can either use it for cutting things or even protecting myself when I come across danger.
    Such is the pen which I designed.Isn’t it useful and attractive?
  • 系统解析:
    本文是一篇说明文,所给的要点很清楚:说明学生所选物品设计理由;介绍此物品新功能.属于提纲作文.在写作时人称用第一人称和第三人称.时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主.重要短语:necessity.(必需品),be familiar with t(对…..熟悉),not only …..but also…..(不但….而且….),come across(偶遇),aspect(方面).
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