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1 假如你是红星中学高三李华，请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封信，告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营，希望他一起参加，邮件的内容包括： （1）介绍训练营的相关内容（例如；时间，地点，参加者等）； （2）说明你打算参加的原因； （3）询问对方的意向. 注意： （1）词数不少于50； （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数. 提示词：龙舟训练营 Dragon Boat Training Camp Dear Jim，

参考答案：Dear Jim
I am writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday.I am going to join the Dragon Boat Training Camp.I wonder if you would like to go with me.This camp will open on July 20th.If offers us a lot of interesting activities.We can enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture.If you are interested in Chinese culture and want to join it，I will send you more information to it.
Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer.

Yours，
Li Huas.
系统解析：
本文为应用文-电子邮件的写作，属于提纲作文.在写作时应使用第一人称，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时.重要短语：the summer holiday（暑假），join the Dragon Boat Training Camp （参加龙舟训练营），wonder if （想知道是否），offer sb sth（提供某人某物）.

2 假如你是李夏.你看到关国留学生Sharon 在网上发贴，希望有人能帮助她提高普通话（Mandarin）水平，她可以教英语作为回报.请银据以下提示用英语给她写一封电于哪件. 表达给她提供帮助的意愿； 说明你能胜任辅导的理由； 给出讲好普通话的两点建议； 提出你学习英语的具体需求. 注意： 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好； 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称； Hi Sharon， This is Li Xia.I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarm. .... Li Xia.

参考答案：Hi Sharon，
This is Li Xia.I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarm. I am quite interested in it.I think I’m fit for it.As a student，I have been learning Mandarin for many years.In addition，I am Chinese，which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life.So I’m quite confident that I can help you learn Mandarin.
Learning Mandarin takes time，so if you want to learn it well，you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday.As the saying goes，practice makes perfect.Besides，you can also read some books in Chinese，see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes.Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning，by which you are sure to make great progress.
In your post，you say you can teach English as a reward.It is just what I want.I’m eager to improve my English.So，if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin，you can also help me improve my English.We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese，so that we can improve our oral speaking.
Hope for you early reply!
Yours Sincerely
Li Xia.
系统解析：
本文为应用文--电子邮件的写作，属于提纲作文.在写作时应使用第一人称，时态主要为一般现在时.重要短语：learned from （向…学习），be fit for （胜任），a must（必须物），practice makes perfect （熟能生巧），make great progress （取得进展），be eager to（渴望做），contact（联系，接触）.

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